All Comments on 'Retreat to Eremenos'

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Mara12Mara12about 10 years ago
Barely breathing...

You did it again.... This story reams and eviscerates me. And at the end, I heave a sigh of relief. It lays out repulsion and desire, here two faces of the same need.

It brought to mind Johnny Cash's rendition of Hurt, to which I'm listening while coming down off your writing.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 10 years ago
Another Great Story!

I want to meet Edward! =)

AnonymousAnonymousabout 10 years ago

I'm so glad he took off with Hal. Hal could offer him love and certainly wouldn't be a disappointment in bed. And he wasn't just wanting him for sex, uncaring that he caused his father's death.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 10 years ago

I also think he did the right thing to go with Hal.

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Former SR71 pilot, currently professional writer and book editor; writes under name "habu" on other erotica sites. My erotica books can be found under the author name habu or Dirk Hessian (and coauthored books with Sabb under the names Shabbu or Stephen Kessel) at S...