All Comments on 'Return from Yukon'

This is IT!!!

But honey please forgive me ….

Oh I love you….

Rinse, Repeat. Feel like I am reading a syrupy shampoo commercial.

The first half of the story was a foregone conclusion, they were getting divorced.

The new "classic" relationship was a true love story. The temple scene, the new memories, were powerful.

"Come." Indeed.

Rigged DNA test .

Helens kid is Pierre's .

A very engaging story with strong imagery. That said, there is no way I could follow that path after her betrayal.

Because of today's sequel from greenday0418, I decided to re-read the original, then this, and then today's sequel. "Return from Yukon" is a staggering achievement. GA is, I am reasonably certain, an American writer, yet he voices the MC/narrator as totally Brit as had ukresearcher in the original. His character is consistent, that British restraint and tendency to acquiesce. And the events in this story flow very smoothly, very logically. And the romantic payoff at the end is SO moving. No wonder he went on to write "February Sucks"--this is genius. And it's a 5 only because no higher score is allowable.

Reading this because of Greenday0418s sequel published yesterday. I read the original by Ukresearcher some time ago.a good story, But the MC is just too nice and Helen just too stupid for my liking.

4/5

I agree could not get past DNA test. Rigged. With his humongous cock he would be hitting her cervix and unless sterile no way he would not have gotten her pregnant

A good attempt to rehabilitate Helen, but what about the husband? Helen conspired and agreed to fuck the troll, so it wasn't assault, it wasn't rape, and he didn't deserve being murdered. I'm glad he was, but that's my bad. Your story was all about forgiveness and restoration of love and commitment to their child, and maintaining a loving respectful friendship. Except he's a killer, right? Is Helen still a slut? The DNA results somehow made Helen a changed woman, for the better, supposedly. What made him a changed man? Helen would never betray her husband again if they remarried, but he would instantly kill the troll again if he could. Somehow an unequal outcome in terms of rehabilitation and change of character.

Helen wanted her cake and to eat it too, for a month. Looks like her ex husband is having his cake and eating it too for the rest of his life. Hope her month of lust was worth it.

Thanks for the effort.

Thanks for the effort.

Not sure you didn't get another story accidentally attached to the Yukon story. And yeah, I'd double check that DNA test.

I suppose this is the best that can be done given the source material.

I read GreenDay0418's attempt and thought I'd give GA's story a try. Given the original story's weaknesses this was a superb effort. 5* from me.

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It's interesting how you made the man as insecure as one could be and shifted all the blame on the woman. This cannot be considered as a sequel but rather a standalone interpretation for it did miss the sardonic humor and burlesque tone the originally story portrayed. These one dimensional characters are not at all the ones from the original. This whole story seemed to be unending series of interal monologues that only got repetitive and dull as the story progressed. I personally felt the narrator-Kate arc very rushed and forced.

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While the original characters were incredulous in their behaviours, they were nevertheless interesting but the characters you have created are simply not interesting enough captivate the reader. These characters are simply black and white. You spinned the original story to a somber, commonplace, mass appealing banality.

The other thing you specifically got wrong was 'Helen comparing her miserability in historical trip to that of the narrator's on the hell trip'. Helen pointed out how the narrator would have been "happier" on his historical trip but that wouldn't have lasted forever for he knew his trip was supposed to end just like her experience with Pierre would come to an end.

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I have this feeling that you have a tendency to please your readers. When you try to do that, you lose your true voice within and I think that's what happened with this story.

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I know this story is almost 3 years old now but I felt like putting out my words here for I think this could have been done better.

The language used is so tacky and over the top. The characters are one dimensional and self obsessed. I didn't like the narrator one bit. What a load of syrupy crap. Who talks like that? These are not the same people from the original one. They never could be. This was done to gratify the BTB spammers. Too over the top.

cuck spammers they will criticize

the real man says 3*

Overly long and sadly, this story that didnt need to exist was based on the premise that She loved her husband.

At no point did i get that impression from her at all, sure she cried and said it, but beyond that? C'mon, no one could possibly believe she loved hubby.

Even a mentally ill closeted cuck boy would honestly say she didnt give a damn about her husband.

So a story based on a supposed "love' that in no way existed easily falls completely apart, as this did. I began skimming just because the reailty did NOT match the words or actions.

This did indeed rank an Epic fail.

WTF is Jack Fallon?

The story was very good until Kate comes into it. I do like the way you have with words. But sometimes I have to re-read them to clearly understand the way you are thinking. I accept your happy ending. But going I can think of four hard endings.

Helen unfortunately craved for the monster and the her monster came out. Any how I liked it Georgia A.

A good ending to a terrible story. I'm not sure how the author managed that, the original was straight up pure garbage while this was good. 5 stars, gave the original 1.

Well written as usual but the 'living arrangements' had an unrealistic lack of tension and the ending seemed a tad too contrived. Still, much better than most offerings in this genre.

LA

GA just can't help but write feminized male characters: "Helen, when you told me how you scuttled my escape attempt, and how you wanted to use my love for you to protect his child, I had hope. It hurt like hell, but you were being honest. I knew you were, because I had already figured all of that out. So I asked one more question: a question with a specific answer, which I know. If you told the truth, we might just possibly have a chance. If you didn't, we were finished. You didn't."

No man would recognize this cretinous character as a male. Yes, he eventually divorces the treacherous slut, but it is only after we are put through the Agonies of Oprah reading about his "complex" emotions. "Kate" appears in the story as a device to provide this weak, needy, irresolute character (as written in this story) with a "happy ending", but it doesn't read as an organic part of the story. It's something tacked onto the core story, rather like some gee gaw bolt on auto part that is bolted onto an engine.

This author extends stories by taking initially strong male characters and making them weak, feminized men. (see, e.g., the "February" abortion of a story)

I don’t think I could stand the sight of her after that honeymoon.

Bill S.

Lol. That was staggeringly awful.

Living together is far-fetched, considering what she did over a course of 1 month. Of course, he would be very concerned about her depression and maybe a potential attempt of committing suicide. You just can't off love completely. The name Hope was a perfect name for their first girl.

Two more points.

I am pleased he was able to get over any distrust for women in general and found new love and a wonderful life

Although I wanted a slow painful death for Yukon man, Any death will be acceptable

Another well written story by GeorgeAnderson. It's a bit of a stretch for the first wife character, but it worked for the plot. I taught classical history and archaeology for over twenty years, and met my first wife working together on Cyprus. And, yes, there was some Classical role-playing involved, so kudos to the author for imagination. And, yes, also, you can forge bonds based on common interests that last a lifetime. For us, decades until cancer took her. She was a curator for a museum classical dept, and our shared interests were an extension of love. However some commenters regard the husband character, I applaud the imagination and story telling.

Wow what a sweet wife . I would have Divorced her on the way home

Utter and complete nonsense... Illogical, defies any stretch of even the most basic common sense concerning how people act and reason... The internal logic of this extended tale is spurious at best and simply stupid irrelevant scenes poorly connected by emotional overreaction. It is so very bad that readers find themselves discarding the logic of the story and trying to fill in the multitude of plot holes that the author tries to tie together with a rather obscene overreliance of deux ex machina off stage add ons. Thus, the author utterly fails to convince the reader to suspend disbelief....which defines epic fail

1 star for utterly wasting our time on this mess,.

Two ending pages that changed 5 stats to two. Pure unbelievable garbage

A very unconvincing ending. By choosing to make the husband the father, George Anderson has turned an interesting story into a fantasy that has no believability. The only credible continuation would be the one where Pierre is the father and what Helen and her husband decide to with each other and the child. Writing about any other outcome is just a waste of energy.

1 star - One more stupid cuck/wimp crap story. I did not even get past the first paragraph.

The ASSHOLE should have been neutered for even suggesting what he eventually did. The husband should have gotten an annulment and not touched her skanky slut body ever again.

Cuck shit ... no loving wifes

An utterly brilliant, imaginative, and apppropriately positive construct from the untethered strands of the original piece, which too was fascinating in an erotic, if horrific, and incomplete way. Well played, indeed. A 5 to the next exponent🤙🏿👋🏾⚔️

Great story, notwithstanding the howling dissents of the knuckle staggers who think they own this site. Thank the lord they do not; their embitterment and likely self emasculation leaves them always panting to find som resin to call a character or author A “cuck” or “wimp.” The are such reflexively overreact it’s who live ina tiny, unnuaned binary world, where absolute good and pure evil are ever the only choices, I’m their pure black and white color scheme. They must be a ball to live with, NOT. Zhatd too i vision any of them in a long standing relationship, marriage or otherwise. BevUse who would want their insecure, howling asses? Perhaps those moms, but not likely once they get a careful look at what their loin’s have buorne Nd unleashed on the rest of dis. Perhaps someday they’ll get laid, relieving some of the presssure to be the first and loudest to scream “cxuckl” every time a character is developed who decides to move forward in life without burning everything to the ground around him because he’s been wronged via infidelity. WhT amuses me the most is that the cuck hollers Invariably holler themselves out and say stupid stuf about all the bold, brutal, and “honorable” things they’d do to right the wrong some to them when they know, and we know, that they’d do no such thing because it’ unlikely to a virtual certainty trhat any halfway worthwhile, self regarding woman would be that clos to them anyway. In other words, it’s hard to have a wife cheat on toy if you’ve never had one. They realize, S their vitriol suggests, that the cuck hat that they so fear is something that they’ll never be eligible to wear. You need to have a woman before that ht can be given to you. These bunch of yucks can’t even qualify for the cuck branding. Because I like the “Yukes,” the cuck a thing least had a wan who could do them wrong.

sao this asshole lets his child be raised by the phycologically damaged vile bitch he was married to and then hooks up with a woman she picked out for him and oviouysly manipulated him into a setup ffs george you are better than that

I really hated the original story. It very difficult to warm up to this one though it turns out better.

A continuation to a story that should never been written. Uggh. Just beyond that the wife stepped into her month long fantasy of barbaric sex. Disappointing.

I am not someone who hates a reconciliation story, but no matter how many pages George Anderson writes to turn Helen into some brave saint, after what she did to her husband, she didn't deserve to keep a part of him in the form of a daughter. If any character deserve to get the BTB treatment, it was Helen.

How pathetic . How pathetic.

Hey George It's beyond my Imagination how you survived in this Forum.

Oh what I'm saying there are Fools like you Everywhere.

This story, if you could call it, is a waste of Space and Time.

Like your Every stories there is a Dumb , Spineless Moron.

George or Georgina obviously hates Men and in particular Husband's?! But seriously how fucked up do you have to be to keep writing this bullshit and pretending their not gaslighting propoganda

George,

Well done at fixing a horrible tale (the writing was good just couldn't get past the characters). Your ending gives great balance. Not sure that I could have Helen that close but it works well in your story.

Brilliantly clever, to bring love and Hope to the remnants of an ugly horrid tale. Good story I think by a master story teller. LP

Pathetic

Finish but not a great one.

Wow

1 star - I would have just killed the ASSHOLE without a second thought - the first time he even tried to sleep with my wife - end of story.

The cuckmeister strikes again. Where would we be without a weak, non confrontational male character that lacks communications skills, is unable to make decisions, and of course second guesses everything. Standard formula here and absolutely nothing new of course, what else would you expect from a writer that will forgive my women any offense, no matter how egregious. Don’t tell me this mc had a backbone, this is just pandering.

Are you shitting me, it became so bad I could not finish it, first time ever,

Well you made this one a love story, but not one to be read by kids, I liked it .

Interesting, thought-provoking story with a bittersweet ending.

Haven't read the original. Didn't agree with much of the early parts. But I liked where it ended.

I’m terribly sorry to say I really hated it. I understand the work that went into it, but the reality is that he should have left his wife dead beside the SOB she used to ruin her husband. She was the instigator of everything, not Pierre. The husband was a gutless wonder.

Nope!

If the MC and his new wife truly cared about the reformed slut ex-wife, they would not allow the state of affairs depicted at the conclusion to continue. At some point, the ex's penance must be over. She must move forward into a life more fulfilling than being the remorseful former wife who each day has a ring side seat to the family life she foolishly destroyed. Perpetuating the status quo would represent far greater cruelty than that exhibited by the slut and the now deceased manwhore on the island.

Great story.

Loved it.

5

Whom ever you are just amazing.

LOVE slap-hapy-papy #9

The writing was good but I feel a bit sad about Helen. After her guilt ridden ordeal she sufered the most, livinf her life with her friend now married to her ex husband. I hope they do have a 3 way soon. Love for ex will never let her find another man.

And someone from the audience yelled "What the holy fuck?".

@anotherwonder’s comment is revealing. It demonstrates why @aw others like him are alone in life, and most likely always will be. Helen, as despicable as her conduct was, wasn’t threatening to kill hubby if he tried to interfere with her sex with Pierre. Do recall however, that Pierre was an untepeyent killer, and serial

Predator. He was rightly killed, and Helen rightly spared and subsequently divorce, as should be.

I just love all the phony tough guys commenting on this site. Good luck @nixrox, you’d have had to kill Pierre with your bear hands. Good luck with that. How’d that turn out for the last guy who tried it? Under the circumstances, I’m pretty sure I would have tried, and I think succeeded. But then, I really am a tough guy, trained actually, unlike @nixrox and the other bloviating commentariat here.

Sorry to say it was just a nice read, at least most of it. It kind of drug out in the ending. But if the author would have gone ahead, and brought his ex in to his bed with him and his new wife. What a fucking waste for his good looking ex's pussy going to waste, I'm sure she would have been very Grateful to get fucked after so long..

WTF so the whole 30 days good old huge was Busy fucking his wife. The fucking wimp ass husband couldn't even pick up a large kitchen knife, and shove it up Pierre asshole, or his back, neck, or any fucking place to kill him. 30 fucking days watch him fucking his wife, Dude just go kill yourself!!

There is something seriously wrong with the author of this "story".

I read the original and commented at the time there were hidden meanings and agendas in that story and I felt the wife was actively involved. This version showed she was. I never get the whole "I still love you and always have" statement. No you didn't and don't. No one truly loves someone and do that to them. Fulfilling her fantasy I call bullshit on that. The only thing fulfilled was her desire to be a slut and abuse him. She'd already cheated on him and I'm sure would do in the future. This was a very good version as often is the case GA wrote it brilliantly well done sir. The only bit I can't work out is why agree to live with his ex? That just isn't healthy. And I'm sure his wife genuinely has mental health problems. BardnotBard