All Comments on 'Return to Summer Days'

Great Story that can have several more chapters

and the story complete, but a second part would be, kind of, appropriate. If you feel like it, that is...

That was a fantastic story

I have to agree this one needs some more chapters really enjoyed reading it !!!

Great characters and a terrific story.

Your protagonist was the kind of jerk that would fun to hang out and have a few beers with, as long as you could keep him away from your sister.

Minor continuity observation - Christy took her blouse off twice. Once when as Mike closed the door to the motel room, again as she 'did the backstroke across the bed'.

This is a good story but is in desperate need of a sequel, the one where the smartass lawyer-Ex gets taken down, she gets her shit back and her kids like the new guy loads better than their bio father (lower case on purpose). A vague ride into the sunset might suit some of us, but I like a bit of karmic justice in my stories, it might be hinted at by some authors, but nothing beats reading it in black and white!

@carrteun: Thank you so much for pointing that out politely. I get so sick of people slamming authors for making mistakes instead of being helpful about them.

Also, "did the backstroke across the bed" was a great bit of imagery.

"I can't remember the last time I had more than one orgasm in a day."

There's only one correct response to that statement, and it is:

"Challenge accepted!"