by WFEATHER
As always -- the best on here.! Can't wait until your next writing on this one as I know it will be as good. Besides we have to see if they won any money on the Lottery.! Yipes. Thanks. JAG/TSO
Like I said, this & "Standing Strong Forever" are so beautifully written. Can we have some more of this couple and see where they progressed? So hard to find since they're not grouped together. Would love to see some BDSM action with them....and you're leading our imagination with that ice....hmmmm...you're really a good writer. Kudos!
its clear the writer will never end it. it was 2 very good chapters, but it really is desperate for a 3rd chapter to bring some closure to the relationship. i do agree with some of the other comments the brother is a little nerdy, but I'd like to give it 5 stars. However, i'm not rating it. its needs to be completed. then i'd go back and rate it.
A great addition to the original story!! Can't wait to find another! Thank You Sir