by de_Vere
Love this story. I like the characters, even the fortune teller. I hope you have more to add.
I'm so glad I found the third part and was so happy to know there were two previous stories. This has been such a fun read.
The. Old Fortune Teller has been a good twist.
Hope you add more chapters.
I love your writing style, the banter between the two. It’s reminiscent of the kind between couples in the great film noir era of the 1930s and 1940s, or several of the great TV (eventually) paired couples shows of the past. I love the playful verbal fencing and jousting, and the way we’re let in on the thoughts he doesn’t express out loud. It adds a fun aspect to the sex, and while sex is something serious, done right, it should be fun, too. Five Stars!
kept the story going nicely,
smart to get some condoms especially if you are planning to keep screwing her.