by mello27
on your first story. The story itself was a good story. You are off to a good start and I look forward to reading more from you.
For leaving us hanging!! It seems like you had no ending in mind when you put this story together. That's sad because you had a good story going.
This was a good start of a story. I realize this is a Literotica site, but, more story would have been good.
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Pasqual