All Comments on 'Reunion Ch. 01'

Lovely writing... sequels pleaseeeee ASAP

Good beginning. Looking forward to further instalments.

Dude needs more sequals that was an epic first chapter

It's too bad the beginning wasn't edited (3+ obvious errors).

Nice beginning. Trish feels guilty. Aileen seems to care less. Katie? She seems to be hiding some kind of feelings for her uncle. Might be an interesting competition there.

A good beginning. Never mind a couple of typos. I'm sure the writer has a lot more to come. (no pun intended!). These mature brother / sister feelings do exist and develop. Interesting to see how this author expands on it.

always enjoy your stories, thank you!! as for length you could easily got to 4 or 5 pages per chapter. you have more then great enough writing talent that the extra pages would be more enjoyable. thanks will be waiting for your next installment.

You have such a way of fleshing out your characters, and the vivid descriptions with their detail is amazing to read.

I would like longer chapters though.

But that's the only fault I could see.

I'm so excitedly looking forward to more.

Well written and thoroughly enjoyable read.

I agree, too short and I feel like I was left hanging. This story needs an ending.

This was a truly nice story. The character development is right on. Keep up the good work.

for suggesting submitting smaller segments.