All Comments on 'Reunion Ch. 01'

by The_Tin_Man

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AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
Well!

I truly enjoyed the charcter development. They are believable people without 12" cocks and breasts the size of the Dolomite mountains. The sex is believable as well, and you've done your homework about the effects of sexual abuse. I very much look forward to the coming chapters (and I do hope the well doesn't "dry up"!). Also, the care in grammar and spelling are greatly appreciated!

Congratulations on a very ell done start, tin_man.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 13 years ago
Screwed Up

What a screwed up family first he fucks his daughter, then moans he's not gettin it with the wife then pretends another skank is the wife but wait after all that he was abused boo hoo and he now loves his wife. Write a story that has some semblance of credabilty

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