All Comments on 'Reunion in the Pines'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
Too hot

This was amazing! Keep up the good work!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
Edit

Clair / Claire, first person / third person, tenses... you’re close but find a good editor and you’ll shine.

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