All Comments on 'Reunited with his Sister'

by miss_D_mena

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CharetteCharetteover 2 years ago

left space for a 2nd Chapter

StoryguyStoryguyover 2 years ago

Good story. The devil is in the details. Be sure to check your maths when talking about ages. Sister is 13 years older than him. Mom is 17 years older than him. Small mistakes in an otherwise great story.

Staril1Staril1over 2 years ago

Waiting patiently for chapter two....

kaidmankaidmanover 2 years ago

good work hopefully you write a sequel to this it was really good and you handled all the nuances perfectly

coyote62coyote62over 2 years ago

A 2nd chapter is definitely needed now!! Bravo!!! Great story!!

Radomir1Radomir1over 2 years ago

Interesting story.

Just a little screwed up with age.

One sister's eight years older, the other's six. Then stepmother's 10, then 14, then 10 again.

I won't keep this story among my favorites, but I give it 5 stars.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

WAUW !

Thanks for sharing ;-)

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

We Want more.

RamazaRamazaover 2 years ago

Snit og a weird story, and I’ll never get used to how crude the British English can become when it is about sex.

Still a fun read, thx.

smltwnguysmltwnguyover 2 years ago

Well done, looking forward to another chapter. Although trans isn't my thing I don't find that others shouldn't pursue what they want, to each their own.

muskyboymuskyboyover 2 years ago

weird one, that is for sure. Not even sure if I like it or not. Donna loves him but can't wait for Gloria's cock? 4/5 for the good writing.

MiddlesonMiddlesonover 2 years ago

Different story for sure but still enjoyed it. Still 5/5 for the creativity and writing. Would enjoy a pt.2 maybe he knocks both donna and jill up with his kids. He tries gloria now that she converted to full woman.

ballfan2001ballfan2001over 2 years ago

Great story, lots more chapters please

GingernautGingernautover 2 years ago

I definitely hope you plan to continue this story.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

The story needed to continue. There's no way Glorias big cock needed to be removed, it's too valuable! Would like to see her keep it eventually fuck Mark up the ass!! :-)

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

One of the best stories I've read over several years here. Mark now needs to fuck Gloria up the ass as well as her cunt!! :-) we know Donna likes it!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

Did not like strpmother Donna

AnonymousAnonymous6 months ago

I have 1 problem.

Stepmom is 30, not 32.

When sister is 16, stepmom is 4 years older(20)

Sister moves out at 18 and story starts 8 years later.

18+8=26

26+4=30

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