All Comments on 'Reunited with my Family Ch. 01'

Really, another 10” cock story????

She took 10” fully up her cunt and up her ass????

Where the hell did you learn about female anatomy????

On another planet, certainly not this one.

You were going great guns until you decided to forget about the sizes of cunts and colons.

You ruined the story thru sheer ignorance of proper proportions of female anatomy.

You did not need to do that.

Scores 2/5, the sheer ignorance is just so galling.

Fun story. It's a good bit of sexy fun.

Looking forward to more when it's written.

Thank you for writing it. Always have been a big fan of big tits and casual sex in erotic fiction.

@wargamer…. This is called fiction, OK! people embellish, people downright lie because it’s fiction once again it’s called fiction. There is no truth or validity to any of the stories!?!?!? And you obviously don’t know the human anatomy little guy you just need to take your critiques and shove them up your wahoo

Good story. Keep it up.

Hope you go into more details on why there town is like that in a future ch

Do we have to wait till 2028 for the next installment?