All Comments on 'Revenge'

this would be a beautiful story if u'd finish it. i loved it so far!

i love a bit of ruthless seduction! and he has mixed feelings towards her already. Please continue.

but now my question is who controls who?

you really need to continue this story, this is only the beginning, and i loved every bit of it...

Not sure why you don't have one of those nifty little red H's yet. This was hot hot hot! Thanks! :-)

utterly spectacular! do finish it!

This story was sooooooo hot!!! You have to continue it!!

This story was so sexy! I got so wet and i can imagine myself in fionia's place. Please continue this story really soon it was so good!!!!

loved it!!

I loved it, I hope there's more coming

fab story!!...one of d bests i hv read here..in terms of da easy passion and da obviously skilled writing..waiting for more..cnt wait to read what happens next..plss plss dnt keep us waiting for too long..:)

awww..wish there had been some more chapters to this.

This was really good

Please keep writing!

It's becoming my pet peeve that people persist in thinking that the hymen is actually somewhere midway up the vaginal canal. It isn't. Let's not propagate this myth, please?

impresionante y amedita nuevos capitulos hasta terminar, creo que es un desafio para todos tus lectores, gracias, am_sr

To the victor goes the spoils! She might as well lick the wife also, as she proves her new found layalties!

I am working on a second chapter to this story

He is so hot and yet gentle at the same time. I love it! Please write more. I can't wait for the next chapter.

Men in the past would claim a woman as his after he has taken her virginity and she would be at his disposal. But it is no longer true now. Women now even has the ultimate choice on whether she wants to be pregnanted or not. If she does not want, she can always take a morning after pill. And if she wants the child but not the father, she can keep the child and leave the guy. The society has long accepted single mother.

Exactly which vowel is the vowel of revenge?

It got me hot and bothered, but it needed something.....

Kept thinking when is he going to tell her.

When is he going to tell her that he trusted her father for many years, only to learn he had been a spy for the other kingdom.

That her father betrayed him, and so if she wanted him to trust her word she'd have to earn it.

THIS is one of my favorites!! I would love to see more soooooo much!! His dominance is divine in this!!

an excellent use of resources on hand. TK U MLJ LV NV

we Need more parts of this Story with some kmind of happy ending. maybe him marring her or so.

This needs a happy ending don't get me wrong it's got as fuck but i want to know what happens between keira and Edward like in living for this story Now

I'm inclined to agree that this story needs another part!! It's hot as hell

Only thing that would make this story appealing is if Keira were to have had a hidden blade — and was able to stab the piece of excrement in the heart. Or possibly only castration in return for deflowering just in the spirit of things.

I felt uncomfortable because my name is Keira 😂