All Comments on 'Revenge is a Wonderful Thing'

Yeah. Write the next part(s). They could be fun.

Let the story flow you rushed it a little.

I would like to see the story continue. Maybe also detail Ted's and Peg's lives and the burn they feel?

Part 2 sounds appropriate.

I love it...Chapters 2, 3, 4, 5, 6, 7, 8...need to be written. How the ex's are pining over their losses, how Jack is proceeding with Janice, the downfall of the two cheaters, etc. Keep it coming...

I doubt either of them care who their "ex's" are screwing now since they cheated before and now are divorced. The only minor revenge would be him getting the position at the company and having all the financial benefits while Ted works a fast food job for minimum wage. As for revenge on the wife had she gotten some STD that had no cure and this guy gets all the young girls he can handle maybe.

But for these two cheated on people to screw 25 times? No big deal.

This story is not finished. You would need at minimum 1 more chapter

You need to change it from revenge sex to a true romance down the road.

We need more of Jan's and Jack's adventures

The cheaters got off way to easy! I mean Ted was demoted but is still with the company and Peg was divorced and has to go back to work? I just don't see much revenge on Ted (except getting his job and bonus) and I see NO revenge on Peg. I'd like to see a continuation where they are punished much more. Would also be interested in Peg explaining why she did it? Any remorse?

I would like to see more of Jack and Jan's romance also. But really think these other issues should be addressed as well.

Can't wait for the next chapters! Revenge sex is always a good time!

I can't wait for the next chapter

Do Jack and Jan end up together?

Please explain wifey's thinking about her affair with Ted.

Would’ve been better if Jack and Jan hooked up permanently

He threw away good hard money for 25 fucks with the Boss.

Come on, as if.....

Scores3/5

Great story, please continue it!!!

I GAVE YOU CINCO ESTRELLAS (FIVE STARS)...MORE IS NOT ALWAYS BETTER, BUT IN YOUR CASE AND CONSIDERING YOUR TALENT, GO FOR IT IF YOU FEEL INCLINED TO DO IT...CHEERS!

So what happened to the slut wife? How did the asshole get divorced from Mrs. White so fast? Pretty standard story, no work or imagination put into creativity so the little things like possible time line conflict should have been given more consideration.

Sequel please. There's too many loose ends. don't stop now.

Good job, but we need the next chapter.

Very good story.

And you definitely should add additional chapters.

Did not mind boss fucking another untill realized was his wife! So not identifying with protagonist as anything but shit.

Not a bad story but feels very incomplete not to mention had a few problems. The cheaters got off WAY too easy especially the cheating wife. Feels odd the wife was even cheating if the MC's action with the boss lady is any indication, he's better and bigger then the former boss. Wouldn't have minded seeing something from the wife's viewpoint like she thought she was helping her husband in her own twisted way or just got off on banging her hubbies boss, some explanation for her actions. The former boss poaching the wife of his best worker seems odd but can be excused by the boss being a arrogant dbag. Overall though a 5 star outing, just wish there was more to go with it.

So,so. And if the wife knew her hubby was screwing an employee's wife for 4 months and did nothing, she's definitely opened up the company to a lawsuit. Because the wife's hubby was manipulating the cuckold's work schedule to accommodate the screwing around.

Good read needs more chapters.

Yes we need more revenge and the cheaters haven’t really been hurt yet

You do know that companies carry huge insurance policies that cover these kinds of torts? That's why companies are required to conduct sexual harassment prevention training, have robust HR procedures and must comply with governmental workplace anti-harassment/-discrimination lawsuits. As stupid as Mrs. White is, she deserved to be taken to the cleaners. These insurance policies only kick in when the corporation has satisfied their maximum liability payout which is over a million dollars.

Same bullshit, different names, a load of bollocks.

Great story - very erotic. Good plot - would like more

Jack has teenage hormones

No imagination

Yes waiting for part three

Stupidest. Most illiterate. Most irrational. But I did like about tits - giggled in that sensual way I loved.... snark snark!