All Comments on 'Revenge of the Nerd Ch. 49'

You can't leave us hanging with what happened between Jeff and her father. I need follow up.

Still reading.

RP, you go at your speed its teasing but building to a crescendo, I just hope we'll not be disappointed with the outcome.She seems to be getting antsy and discouraged with the arrangements. Keep up the good work.

But love this fluffhead...

I am getting as frustrated as she is...sorry, it is just that your series is one that I have really enjoyed, but I am starting to have difficulty maintaining interest as it is stretching on with such small snippets or snapshots into their life and relationship. Good writing, good storyline, but.....it is dragging a bit!

Check out any book on writing. A chapter isn't supposed to end with "and then he saved her." It's supposed to end, "the train was almost upon her."

Literotica has scheduled 49-52 to be posted in four consecutive days. If you're impatient, which I would be in your place, I have posted through chapter 52 on my site.

tease! give me the next part!