All Comments on 'Revenge of the Nerd Ch. 70'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago
jeff is asleep...

...at the wheel: his first run-in with eBENezer went well because he knew what to expect, even before he met him; now that he has experienced his underhanded style, jeff should know that there is going to be a plot to break them up.

sun tsu would tell jeff to keep his head out of his ass.

m_anyonem_anyoneover 12 years ago
More Family?

Oh, I should have realized that there would be more family. Sabrina sounds interesting, though. It is a nice comparison to the old Ashley. What might she be up to?

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
I've really enjoyed your story from the beginning rps

To readers who are unsatisfied by one page postings: I've loved realising when rps has posted every now and then and going back to where I left off last time - ie reading more than one chapter at a time - ie don't be so impatient. I also cottoned on quite quickly to his website in his biography, where you can read many more chapters than are available on Lit. I won't say anymore to spoil the story for others, just please get the ending right rps! Many thanks

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
Keep it up....but....

This is the longest/shortest story I've ever read.... I mean, I really enjoy it, but we are kinda approaching Game of Thrones timeframe here, for what amounts to basically a page a day.

tazz317tazz317over 12 years ago
OLD TIME SATURDAY SERIALS

RPS is turning a great story into an ole fashioned type serial, and this was a fantastic novel and still shows promise. Is it because of the delays in the publishing format to display each chapter page by page. TK U MLJ LV NV

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