All Comments on 'Revenge of the Nerd'

just wow...

Excellent story line/ plot! I loved both main characters

Jeff and Ashley who were able to captivate my attention as if they

were real people and kept me pleasantly amused through out the story :)

I would love more, but I still do love the open ending. You did

a splendid job! ;)

I so enjoyed your story.It was intelligent, touching, funny, and well written-----not exactly what I go to Literotica for, but what,when I do find it at Literotica makes my day (will probably make my week).

Thank you.

this was a great story. i'd love to read a follow-up!

Nice! I really enjoyed this one.

Really well done. It was a pleasure to read. Thanks for sharing.

and skip breaking this up into multiple parts, just complete this story to its logical end wherever it was you first intended taking it please . . .

I have to tell you that I am so glad I just finished this story because it would have driven me nuts waiting 6 years to see where it went.

Brilliant writing, moving on to next chapters

Oops thought the single chapters on your library were a continuation of the original. Really fun story to read looking forward to more ........

While all writing technically is literature, this has a quality that elevates it to a higher plane. Bravo!

It made me think back to High School and how I treated others - it touched a nerve and my heart.

Please, please, continue this story - if the rest of the chapters are up to this level of writing - find yourself a literary agent and get this published. You should be paid for this quality of work.

By far the best story I have read on this site. I can't wait to see where life takes them.

I really enjoyed the interaction between them. You have brought both characters to full life.

The emotional depth that engages the reader and connects them to the characters is wonderful.

I stumbled across this story by accident, but this is the kind of story I want to read. Well-written, humourous, intelligent. Some of your lines just made me laugh out loud, and so endearing too. Methinks you have a major talent for writing.

Has probably put me in a really good mood for the rest of the day!

What a delicious story, makes me want to go look for nerds. Seriously it was a truly touching, inspiring story. How wonderful.

I can offer nothing that hasn't already been said in the fulsome praise that has already been posted here, so I'll just tell you how it made me feel. I was in the role of the nerd long before there was any such word as nerd. I rubbed elbows with the beautiful airheads also. You are the first writer I've come across who has scratched beneath the surface of both those groups and found what makes them tick and what makes them sick. You have done an admirable job of getting it down in words, making it into a story that I am enjoying immensely, but you first spent the time and effort to understand them. Thank you.

This is definitely on my top lists of best stories on literotica. It was well structured, funny and quite meaningful as well. At first it might sem a bit cliche but it was definitely well worth the read. If anyone reads this comment on the feedback portal, you would be a fool to not read this.

But the story is just a little too "nerdy". It's a bit like reading a textbook on random facts....no offense. However, it is different from the rest...congratulations on that note.

That line made me laugh so hard!

I wish I could write like this myself. Practice does make perfect, or at least better, so I suppose I'll just have to practice more.

Bright, corny. decent, but mostly educational.

The dream of every Jewish nebbish: a hot, rich Shiksa and the

sexual technique to exploit her. Talk about wet dreams, hah!

You know, I don't much read erotica anymore. And even with this, it doesn't feel that much like I am. It's kind of like a charming little story with sexual undertones, where sex is what it's supposed to be in romance. It's supposed to be something to get us to bond closer and to become one. Equal and opposite exchanges of pleasure, giving back what was given to us. I loved that...

Your main characters are witty and amazingly funny, and I just fell in LOVE with your writing style. It's not overly-poetic, you're not "trying to hard", it has all of the benefit of the home-style writing that I can relate to, without any of the flaws of it. It's utterly and absolutely wonderful!!!!! Keep up the writing!!!

It is such a great read that I probably would have finished this chapter quickly, but some of the dialog and lines were so good that I had to re-read them and stop to admire them.

Thanks for once a well written story with substance

Easily worth a sixth star....

Somehow..I'm really connecting with Jeff, kinda reminds me of...me

Seldom am I drawn into a story as much as I was here. Extremely well written. Thanks for sharing this!

A very fun and enjoyable story.

This is for those, who like me, might want to avoid this story because there are so many chapters:

1.- Don't worry, the chapters aren't too long.

2.- About (1.-): Yes, the chapters are short. But don't worry, they are the right lenght. The author doesn't rush the story, in case that's your worry.

*5*

There ain't stars enough for this one.

This is an incredible story, good pacing, realistic scenes and very human characters.

Interesting plot, but crappy dialogs. Dead dialogs. Well, at least in the beginning. They improves as the story progresses but I still have a sensation that your characters need to be more alive. For example, Jeff's attraction to Ashey needs more explanation. Little details, but because of them all story balances on the verge of scientific fairy tail.

There were a lot of grammatical errors I overlooked all of that, but you got the spelling of Metallica wrong. That's just terrible.

...and your sense of humor too!!! Looking forward to reading on....!

I almost skipped this story because of the number of chapters. Figured I'd read the first story to get a feel for it. Boy, did I get a feel...a real good feel. Really enjoyed this first story. Now I can't wait to read on. Thank You!

because I'm going to have to read ALL of it.

His "revenge", while it might be and likely is only in her head, is very good.

It's like so far the group she's always been part of have never been exposed to an honesty and insight such as his - since some of them have been remotely mature enough to recognize it even if they might not appreciate it.

It's like introducing a pro athlete to Bill Gates. Though as kids it would be all about giving wedgies and the athlete might still recognize Bill as a nerd, there's no way to ignore the SUCCESS of the nerd and to be struck with the sometimes "I wish..." about something Bill has instead of it always being (in their head) the other way around.

Your characters are believable and have a depth that is appreciated so I'm not feeling like I'm wasting my time having to deal with a plot.

Straight up "porn" of the "Hi, I'm the pizza guy how about you and I fuck?" is boring in the same way watching someone ELSE eat is boring.

This is neither straight up boring nor something I mind reading. And I'm not damming you with faint praise. I can't wait to continue on...

The halting, reluctant manner with which our heroine approaches this transformation is very well done, most convincing!

Of course, she hasn't transformed (perhaps a chrysalis, perhaps not even there yet) but she's definitely not the same caterpillar she was the week before!

Really looking forward to where you take this :)

J

i find your story amusing, checkmate.

This is fantastic

Much better than many books. I love it.

Funny , clever and thought-provoking. Who would have thought one could find such a little literary gem amongst the erotica?

Thank you

Roger

Very nicely done. An update of a priceless, time-worn literary theme. Shades of Shakespeare, West Side Story, and beyond.

I quite enjoyed both the story and the characters. I hope you write a few more chapters- (what? there's how many?) or a hundred! Guess I'll keep reading. Thanks for writing. 5 stars.

Love their mutual discoveries and acceptance.

THIS IS PROBABLY ONE OF THE BEST ROMANTIC STORIES ON THIS SITE. AND SO FAR VERY LITTLE SEX TO CARRY IT. I HOPE THIS STYLE KEEPS CONTINUING THROUGHOUT THE REST OF THE REMAINING CHAPTERS.

...and utterly satysfaying.

And well written. Seeing that there is so much more to the story, I am hoping that there isn't some disaster in these two young peoples' future. An easy 5 stars, so far.

What I read is wonderful, but incomplete.

Looked everywhere for the rest of the story. The storyline is unfulfilled.

Everyone wants all of the i's dotted and the t's crossed. I loved it the way it is. I know there is more chapters, but I loved it the way it is. *****

but read one of the most beautiful, well written things here in Literotica. The character development of ashley is sublime! I know there are other chapters but this can stand alone on its own. The ending is not at all a cliffhanger. I feel like the open ended ending here is wonderfully done. This is my first public comment and i have been a silent reader for many,many years.

I know, it's the title that did not appeal to me. But I am glad, that I finally started to read this series. Excellent writing, funny and entertaining.

Thank you rpsuch.

Enjoyable read but I miss a good ending!

This is just a love story...but for once I loved it...where's part two........

Wonderful story. The only thing off is the title. Thank you!

Wonderful story and I'm eager to finish the series.

Damn. This story screams heart and soul, joyful love. Really awesome!

Wonderful beginning chapter!

Bravo!

I’ve said this to other writers here, I’ve enjoyed this chapter very much.

A good story is when a main character becomes a better person.

Something we all hope to do.

Excellent story and well written. Thanks.

Absolutely wonderful writing. Lots of character building, emotion, confusion, growing as people together.. it was very beautiful. I hope she ends up marrying him and has his nerd babies, and brags to Candy and Jennifer that she stole their nerd, and they can't have him any more. LOL

great dialogue, unspoken lines. I started about Chapter 67-68 and finished it. Sort of wished it went on thru at least 2 babies, preschool. SO, I had to go back to Chapter 1 and wasn't disappointed.

A really nice feel-good story. Just what I needed. Thanx

A cracking good story, wonderful. Thank you

Simplify outstanding.

5 stars

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wtf did I just read. Absolutely amazing.

At the end of the first page i almost gave up on this storey, Ashley seemed so self absorbed, and wrapped up in herself, I could not see how this storey could develop into something interesting, but I carried on and I’m so glad I did, Ashley has had a rude awakening and is hopefully going to grow into a much better person. This is so cleverly written. ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️

An interesting story and has me curious. I can't say I like all the group stereotyping. Makes things a little shallow.

This story is building momentum nicely - extremely well written. I look forward to seeing how it evolves.