All Comments on 'Revenge on a Slutty Cheerleader'

...for last sentences ....why give away information about tape ... not milking it further?

Opens a Pandora's box of questions and doubts:

_ How does the balance of power shift now?.... Anything seems possible ... He said , she said, proof of sexual activity ...

_ While odds might be unclear (author could in future add details, like a previous history, that tilts the balance) this open ending signals to me weakness ... if in a card game a bluff wins a pot, except for training purposes, only weak players show their cards as it lessens their future position

_ Contradicts the turnabout theme

Hopefully part 2 remedies all that. And, yes, the other comment is spot on: The story has a strong erotic appeal

I love the story but I think you needed to add a little more detail to describe her body. I also would change the end to make her believe that she was being recorded and you have her on tape begging for it.

Then in the next chapter, he takes her ass.

I don't know about you, but I think it would be hotter if there was a continuation beyond this with this very ending, she'd still act as haughty as ever in public, but somehow contrive a situation to put herself into a submissive position.

Nothing hotter than giving some dominance back, only to watch them toss it away willingly.

But maybe that's just me.

Sweet sweet revenge.

Rewrite with longer and include more detail with more sex acts.

Maybe she shouldn't have belittled and abused him. She got her payback