by dr_mabeuse
I can't wait to see the movie. You are a fine story teller and have a real knack for keeping descriptions fresh and inviting. Thank you for your contribution.
Sure, it's a hot story. Even if I don't like that kind of mask much.
But I find the thoughts on identity or the lack of it far more interesting. Good material for a longer story, exploring the concept.
Good luck.
I didn't expect to enjoy it. I'm not even sure "enjoy" is the right word. But I couldn't look away, and I wasn't sorry.
I envy the way you play with ideas, unafraid.
The present tense lessened some of the enjoyment for me, as did a couple of brief POV shifts, but the psych aspect rings true -- and there lies the strength of your tale. Nicely done!
I was going to say "another hot and intriging story" but almost all of your stories are this good - you're an amazing writer:)
That was fascinating!! hot, erotic, frightening and intriguing...
i'm off to read more of what you have to offer!
Beautiful and unusual - I loved that you took a pretty normal fantasy and turned it into something dark and sensual and deep. It wasn't long, but it did the job well and definitely wasn't just a literary porno. Sexy and erotic and gorgeous and, let's face it, an event I'd absolutely want to go to. Thank you!