All Comments on 'Rhapsody for Mom'

Damn that was a good read. Reminds me and my Mom. Please continue!

But I NEVER give more than 3 stars for anal, I'm not Bi or gay. 3 stars

That was hilarious! You should turn pro! Very good writing with humour to leaven it out.

Great work.

you need to read your work

1 he never had a blow job then he had a few

2 they fucked when he seen he jerking her self off but then you say the fist time is in her ass you need to read what you write and keep notes

There is a lot of potential for an additional part. please put some thought in to another chapter. Thanks for your efforts.

In the beginning of the story, it says she practices family law. A few paragraphs later, it says she needs to get a job, a hobby or volunteer. She seems to have a lot of time alone. When does she practice law?

...”his affair was still hanging out.” What?

Now that’s one helluva story. You covered all 7 story tags in your story, some extensively and one or two meh, not so extensively, but you remedied that quite well with some pretty good humor humor. I’m quite sure even people with (hoping the PC cops aren’t one trolling) ADHD would hold on and read the full story. ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️, Mr homerdepot. Definitely need a follow up story