by Iwanttwo
Not sure that I like the direction that it’s story is heading
Loved the bit when Diane was desperate to be fucked but he couldn’t get it up for her! (I bet if Tim had walked into the room he would’ve been hard as a rock in a flash... )
I don’t like what Sue is doing to Rick. I want him back with Tim and to stop letting Sue control him. I don’t like her character
Well, now he's in it, isn't he?
The only way out of blackmail is to eliminate the secret leverage.
And I realize I'm operating on a stereotype, but he's not very assertive for an attorney.
So many comments on not liking the direction the story is going, it is a story a few twist and turns make it more interesting, that is a big part of what I love about your work, lovely description of Cock Sucking, twists and turns in the Plot, what could be better, thanks and keep it up.
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