by mike0231
Great Storie...
I´m Horny...Please write chapter 2
Wanna hear more. maybe also do a story where he does his mom so she knows he can please a women.. I enjoyed it alot..
Yes please submit another chapter in Ricky and Karen's story. You left it at a point that you can have the story go in many directions with the next chapter.
Grandtasticcccccccccccc 5 star no doubt. I love it and will be waiting for the 2nd story and more if possible.........thanks so much very very good.
This is a great story. Can't wait to read more.
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Her name change to Lisa at one point, and you left in some typos. Good buildup but not much sex. Overall, disappointing.
Really I haven't even finished the story and have counted at least five times you have used the wrong name. constantly referring to Karen as Lisa (the mother) and even referring to Ricky as David (Karen's husband). Please keep better track of the names you use. Would make the story a lot better.
The first time should always be missionary even if it lasts only a short while and always cum inside the pussy. 3* I won't be reading on.