All Comments on 'Ricky & Karen Home Alone Ch. 01'

by mike0231

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 14 years ago

I like chapter One, so bring on chapter Two

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
more

add chapter two along with the mom

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
great storie..i´m Horny..please..write chapter 2!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Great Storie...

I´m Horny...Please write chapter 2

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
Want more

Wanna hear more. maybe also do a story where he does his mom so she knows he can please a women.. I enjoyed it alot..

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
Great. Well Done

REally enjoyed your story. When can we see chapter 2????

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
top chapter

can not wait for chapter 2 please post it soon

jperrierjperrierover 13 years ago
Hot!!!!

Yes please submit another chapter in Ricky and Karen's story. You left it at a point that you can have the story go in many directions with the next chapter.

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
Ricky and Karen

Grandtasticcccccccccccc 5 star no doubt. I love it and will be waiting for the 2nd story and more if possible.........thanks so much very very good.

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
YES!!!! Write Chapter 2, definately!

This is a great story. Can't wait to read more.

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
Well Done

Keep them cumming Please!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
Chapter 2

Chapter 2 Chapter 2 Chapter 2 Chapter 2 Chapter 2 Chapter 2 Chapter 2 Chapter 2 Chapter 2 Chapter 2 Chapter 2 Chapter 2 Chapter 2 Chapter 2 Chapter 2 Chapter 2 Chapter 2 Chapter 2

Get the message?

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
Proofreading

Her name change to Lisa at one point, and you left in some typos. Good buildup but not much sex. Overall, disappointing.

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago

Too much buildup needs more sex

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
names

Really I haven't even finished the story and have counted at least five times you have used the wrong name. constantly referring to Karen as Lisa (the mother) and even referring to Ricky as David (Karen's husband). Please keep better track of the names you use. Would make the story a lot better.

LegallySaneLegallySaneover 2 years ago

The first time should always be missionary even if it lasts only a short while and always cum inside the pussy. 3* I won't be reading on.

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