by mike0231
I didn't comment on the other two since I sat down reading the 1st chapter and couldn't stop till I got to this one. Very well done. I could see it all. A few spelling mistakes, but I didn't get hung up on them while reading. Can't wait for the next chapter.
Hurry up with chapter 4, Lisa's got to get into the action ;-)
FUCK U MOTHERFUCKERS!!!!