by Swampcooler
Very well written and hopefully a chapter 2 to tie up the loose ends ;)
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one of the most readable stories I've come across at this site. The ending was alittle weak, but 5 stars.
I loved the story line.t left the door open for a sequel. Hope to read more from you. Very good.
This is just like the other one of you I just read, Great story but instead of giving it a nice fulfilling finish you just cop out ;-)
With a good ending it is a sure 5+ but now I can't give it that. It is better than four so I will not wote. I so wish that there was an ending to it!