All Comments on 'Ride with Price Ch. 01'

Loved this story! Great development of the friendship with the dual POV abd the hot sex! Bring on part 2!

Great story but to be honest I never cared for shifting POVs. I find if difficult to follow who is currently talking.

Ted and Marc are a loving couple, and your description of their love-making is wonderful. Since Ted has a "tangle of pubic hair," I am wondering if he has a bit of a tangle of chest hair too? He seems the sexy mature man who might have a beautifully haired chest. Imagine licking the cum out of someone's hairy chest. Dreamy!

Beautiful love story, and I liked the dual perspective very much. It added a lot more dimension to the characters. The slow built up also added to hot climax. You could probably leave the story right here, but I hope that you're planning on at least one more chapter. Great job, ***** plus, thanks. MLF

I think you did a great job shifting between the two perspectives. Surely this isn’t the end for these two guys? Marc still has a lot to experience and Teddy is just the guy to help him explore. Great character development

Loved this story but please don’t introduce the cheating John back into this plot line. He seems like a complete asshole - I hated the mentions of him and that Ted shared he would blow him at intermission. Get rid of the chaise and let Ted and Marc find live without the drama of a dickish ex-lover (or his smarmy wife) in the picture.

I think shifting POVs works better when each POV is longer, but still it was a good story.