by gauchecritic
I love incest stories, but this goes over the line, really sick!!
good beginning and hubby and i hope you continue it.definetly as some recent writers on this site have done-- add some sex charged "bi" male family fun with sons and brothers being shared with mom and bi dad.
Unbelievable, but in a tongue in cheek sort of way. I like the style and the sex.
Terry and Mike were supposed to swap. You're sick!
(And my fingers are sticky)
I'm not normally an incest guy, but I like your style. It's different and infused with liberal threads of black humor. You don't bow to trends and your imagination is delightful.