All Comments on 'Riding Magenta'

well done. Dream or reality? Thanks for it.

The "vast resources" your anti-hero commands are nothing compared to the richness of your imagination, or to the skill, precision and obvious care with which you tell the story. You did an excellent job of putting your reader inside Magenta's head through the whole incident, and giving us a taste of the other character at the very end.

Very unusually among Literotica stories of late, there were no egregious grammatical or spelling errors to jar the reader out of the mental imagery you were so carefully building. You, sir, are a man who works with the written word, professionally and, I imagine, quite successfully; or you have a gifted editor whom you trust implicitly. I would not be surprised if both were true.

Favorited story, favorited author, and I will definitely be reading the rest of your work here. Thank you!

Terrific story. I may never look at a rubber toy the same way again. What a fresh and innovative story. I do hope Magenta is taken back for more.