All Comments on 'Riding the Gauntlet Ch. 01'

this was an amazing story. it gave me all sorts of feelings that i will be using to boost my fantasies. which will lead to all sorts of self-pleasure. ~Blessed Be

Loved the senusality of the writing....looking forward to Ch.2 to see where this will go.

it didn't flow as smoothly as it might. Good start; I'm looking forward to reading further.

I thought it was great, but not really set for the recutance category. I loved your descriptions of the surroundings, very sensual with the textures and material. I miss that in most erotica.