All Comments on 'Riding the Red Ch. 06'

by vampwrrr

Sort by:
  • 1 Comment
cantfightfatecantfightfateover 11 years ago
Just found this story and

I like it! The chemistry between Lucas and Adrienne is good. There are enough unanswered questions to hold my interest and enough pieces of the story revealed each chapter to prevent me from becoming frustrated.

There's enough information about cooking to develop a cookbook! While it doesn't interest me, it doesn't bother me either. It's just your style and I suppose your personality coming through in your writing.

Anyway, I'm really enjoying the story and look forward to more chapters. Keep posting!

Anonymous
Our Comments Policy is available in the Lit FAQ
Post as:
Anonymous