All Comments on 'Right of First Night'

I tend to prefer detailed and perhaps a little debased fornication in my literotica reading. This is quite simply one of the most beautiful love stories that I have read in a long time. Bravo!

Very well done.

As it's said "there is someone for everyone" and very few people are lucky enough to find them.

Brilliant reminded me why I am with the beautiful lady I am with despite a failed marriage in between. Best friends make the most wonderful partners and lovers x

with the identifiable 'mature' commenters.

That was a so enjoyable read.

Very enjoyable - 5*.

If he doesn't marry that girl, then he's a damned fool!

Thank you for a short and tender affectionate story.

Just read this. There needs to be another chapter

Most excellent writing in Lit. Perfect craftsmanship, even perfect spelling, punctuation, phrasing, grammer and highly erotic as well. A wonderful story and a treasure for the Baron.