by knightfantasies
This is fantastic. He’s getting himself s little harem going. Cannot wait to see what comes next.
Last chapter WAS weak.
This chapter WAS FANTASTIC.
Glad you treated Sherri better but she needs to be lesser.
How do you choose between Wendy and Kylie? Love your sister and marry her friend.
Can't wait for the next chapter
what a great story. i love this. i know its too late to have much imput as the next couple of chapters are completed, but i hope Jasmine becomes a part of the group. i'd cut sherri out - maybe she finds a boyfriend - and stick with Kayla, Wendy and J! you've done a great job describing her and building her character.
Can't wait for the next chapter!
I know you wrote this story awhile ago, but I want to let you know what a great story it is. I took a chance in reading it and am impressed with your style. The characters are fleshed out and interesting. I was not a fan with the rough sex he had with Sherry, but liked the way he showed her the difference between that and loving sex. I will be reading more of your stories. Thanks for your time and imagination.
What have you done this is not a damn incest story anymore and the guy character is this is a abusive ass who needs his dick chopped off and fed to him writing a chapter with that ending is the only possible way anyone could fix this shit and do us a favor quit writing until you take classes for the next 20 years and read the dictionary a few thousand times back to back not stop that's how bad you are this is by far the worst story I have ever read you are by far 1 of the worst if not the worst writer I have ever heard of and that's saying something