All Comments on 'Right or Left? Ch. 04'

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Turtle1952Turtle1952over 6 years ago
Fantastic

loving your story and hope to read more soon

kurinaxkurinaxover 6 years ago
Keep em coming

This is fantastic. He’s getting himself s little harem going. Cannot wait to see what comes next.

prop69prop69over 6 years ago
AWESOME AMAZING Great improvement

Last chapter WAS weak.

This chapter WAS FANTASTIC.

Glad you treated Sherri better but she needs to be lesser.

How do you choose between Wendy and Kylie? Love your sister and marry her friend.

Can't wait for the next chapter

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
More

Right another one.. keep them cuming..

goducks1goducks1over 5 years ago
f*cking fantastic

what a great story. i love this. i know its too late to have much imput as the next couple of chapters are completed, but i hope Jasmine becomes a part of the group. i'd cut sherri out - maybe she finds a boyfriend - and stick with Kayla, Wendy and J! you've done a great job describing her and building her character.

Can't wait for the next chapter!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 5 years ago
My 2 cents

I know you wrote this story awhile ago, but I want to let you know what a great story it is. I took a chance in reading it and am impressed with your style. The characters are fleshed out and interesting. I was not a fan with the rough sex he had with Sherry, but liked the way he showed her the difference between that and loving sex. I will be reading more of your stories. Thanks for your time and imagination.

MfkndragonMfkndragonover 2 years ago

What have you done this is not a damn incest story anymore and the guy character is this is a abusive ass who needs his dick chopped off and fed to him writing a chapter with that ending is the only possible way anyone could fix this shit and do us a favor quit writing until you take classes for the next 20 years and read the dictionary a few thousand times back to back not stop that's how bad you are this is by far the worst story I have ever read you are by far 1 of the worst if not the worst writer I have ever heard of and that's saying something

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