by knightfantasies
this story gets better and better. i'm glad you've developed a slightly softer, more caring jeff. really helps the story. VERY EROTIC!! sexy from the first sentence to the last. can't wait to read the next chapter. well-written. this story has a lots of legs - i hope you keep it going for a long time.
5 stars!
I was feeling excited visualising as I read this. Had wished my partner also read this. So many great ideas. Please keep writing .
This was super hot. Please don’t make us wait another six months for the next chapter.
By far one of the best stories on here glad you are writing again