All Comments on 'Right Place'

by MountainDewMan

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TSreaderTSreaderover 4 years ago
A very yummy story!

Very yummy and very wet too! Love it! Thank you!

sarah4202000sarah4202000over 4 years ago
very nice!

very nice!

DAPSlittlelady50DAPSlittlelady50over 4 years ago
Absolutely beautiful!

I loved it so much, it made me feel great.

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
more lessons

Mommy sounds like she has more lessons planned. Can not wait to see if this goes to more chapters. We were almost late leaving for work this morning reading this even tried to stop reading and were doing the just one more paragraph then we will go but no we had to read the whole thing.

We were wondering if mommy has any other naughty toys to teach her daughter about?

LenaptLenaptover 4 years ago
GREAT STORY - 5*STARS!

Lovely Story, give you my 5*Stars!

Please do Not stop now!

Thank you

Aunt Helena

oldwayneoldwayneover 4 years ago
Five Stars!

I loved it! I HOPE YOU WRITE MANY MORE LIKE THIS ONE.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 4 years ago
A NICE, EROTIC STORY. BUT...

A teenage girl (18yo) with her own dildos, who'd broken her hymen herself, but had never had a strong orgasm??? That's just not plausible. Ask any girl and she'll tell you masturbation (especially with toys) is the best way to get off. Though it lacks the emotional and personal connection that a partner of any gender brings to sex, self-pleasure orgasms are most often stronger. Want a female proofreader? :-)

killerbeeezkillerbeeezover 1 year ago

This story is ridiculous. I'm convinced this writer is a virgin.

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