All Comments on 'Right Where I Belong Ch. 03'

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Aftermath82Aftermath82over 12 years ago
OMG

This is major cliffhanger !!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
Fantastic

Well written, damn hot and above all else very touching. Next part NOW!

horsechick91horsechick91over 12 years ago
Ug

Please get that last chapter up as soon as possable! that was not a good place to read your readers, but the story is magnificent!!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
WOW!!!!!

I really love this story and I can't wait for the next chapter...HURRY please :)

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
evil

ending this chapter where it is was completely evil!!!

Kazehana552Kazehana552over 12 years ago

I swear I almost cried when it ended on that part. Can't wait for the next chapter!

LollygaggerLollygaggerover 12 years ago
Glad I didn't notice this chapter when it first posted.

Very glad that I can go right on to chapter 4 now. What a place to leave readers! I should write more, extolling the virtues of your writing, except I have to get to reading that next chapter. Love it!

rabbitfishrabbitfishover 12 years ago
PENULTIMATE

YES! Someone who knows the true meaning of penultimate! I have a pet peeve about people misusing that word... You are awesome, and I will probably comment again on the next chapter, which I am about to read, but I just wanted to mention my joy about your correct usage of penultimate.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 10 years ago

I really wish there was a little more to the conflict than Tom catching them kiss, but i don't mind since I know it will all end happily

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