All Comments on 'Rika's Menagerie'

I confess that I'm not a fan of the various fetishes in your story but in your favour I have to say that you kept them nicely low-key---it would take a very sensitive soul to find them grossly offensive. What I am a fan of, Jackie, is your writing; I think I'd read a grocery-list if you published it on Lit. So pushing my personal preferences aside, I think this a pleasant enough story and worth five stars. As for a sequel, the story stands well enough by itself but it would be interesting to learn more about Rika's background and how she came to be what she is. The tattooed sleeves hint at Yakuza although I don't know if the Yakuza admit women to their ranks.

Beautifully written and an original story

Would like to see how the characters develop along with their kinks

5 stars!

You write naughty things so elegantly! You're such a great writer, Jackie!

Nice intro into a whole world of kink! I hope you continue with these characters.

One of my favs!

I really enjoyed your story and hope that you continue with another chapter!! Thanks for sharing!

This needed a bit better proofing through the first two pages, but once I was past those, I enjoyed the story

Very well written. It would be nice for a short artistic movie.

I would love to read more but only if it consist more risky tasks.

I would like to see the story continue and see where it leads

Your writing is out of this world!

This absolutely needs a sequel! Love it!

Although I wouldn't pass the kink test, the quality of the writing made it a 5-star read. I don't feel that the need for a sequel, but if you write it, I shall certainly read it.

Business and pleasure, a path with some nifty nooks …… this could be a wonderful sensual experience or a horrible disaster …. Im not having any knowledge about the Japanese tradition and business and social gat together, but little did i know its a big difference to a europeans standard …. So i think there is no safety net or? ….. very sensual tale with a fine sophisticated bdsm line

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I loved your story. Is Rika's boss a part of her menagerie? Obviously, lactation is my favorite!

I'd love to see a Second Part of this!

Well written, evocative, and erotic!

Yes please to a second story!

Can't wait for part 2!🥵

delicious!

Would love a part two! 🦊🦌

Really looking forward to part two!

A great introductory chapter!

That was incredible! I don't often get caught up in the characters, but when Kitsune dropped the envelope with the final task back on Rika's desk I was audibly going "no! what're you doing!"

Lovely story Jackie!

Really enjoyed this gem of a story. Would be super stoked to see it as a series. Incredible writing!

Looking forward to checking out your song recommendations. Already a Porter fan so off to a great start.

More Mistress Rika please!!