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All Comments on 'Rik's Monster Ch. 01'

by PaperCutRock

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago

This is shaping up well. More please.

DianceDianceabout 3 years ago

This reads like a D&D game session, or an MMO RPG dungeon which would be an issue, but it is a prologue of a story so nothing to critique there. It does a good job of world-building and a good understanding of the characters. Looking forward to the erotic story that it leads into.

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Polishing my creative writing with something that will actually force me to finish writing: Smut! I want to write the kind of stories I've enjoyed reading here for years.