All Comments on 'Riley's Bar Ch. 01'

No wimp here! Of course there is still space for humans to be humans! I would have thought that the other guy would all ready have assumed responsibility for her... Maybe they have hung their future on him working for them. I do find it strange that everything was done without him getting a hearing relative a divorce..

Seriously, how many times does he need to be divorced? Twice? three times? Who is this fucktard, the Elizabeth Taylor of idiots? JPB, not one of your better ones.

Elaine is one crazy or stupid woman if she think she'll win that one! Besides JPB, you forgot that they wrote everything down on notepads to compare, so that's legal in most states! Great story!!

I'm not normally a fan, but I liked this one.

finally, i jpb story that wasnt retarded! im so glad this guy actually acts like he has a set. haha, fuck the stupid ass ex wife of his and her cult. this is awesome because i knew someone that had something similar happen. although, he didnt spend over 100 days in jail and there were other legal problems. still, this was a great story and im glad it didnt have any of the cliche-coming home early/ beat up other man or woman/ it was just sex, im sorry, can we still be together? bullshit i see all the time on this site. keep it up!

nine months previous then went on to talk about him being a comfirmed bachelor. How would that work then?

Good so far, will the man stick to his guns? Lets see.

but I sure hope they don't get back together. I certainly hope the husband will eventually come out on time and Elaine will wish she never found a mind altering religion.

Yeah. It's been at Stories online for several months, totaling about 8 chapters -- maybe 9.

I've read most of your stories. Some I've liked and some I haven't liked, and there were a couple that I absolutly despised. This was without a doubt the best story you have written to date!!! Please continue this and PLEASE don't turn this man into anything other than what he is.He's got his principles, and he's got the balls to back them up.Great job JPB. thank you.

If any one thinks Elaine is gone then you are probably an idiot.

"Religion is the opiate of the masses" - Karl Marx

Thanks for the entertainment! It will be interesting to see where this goes!

Thanks for writing!

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Very entertaining and well done! PLEASE continue soon. I just hope the continuation is up to par with the start. There are all kind of seed and hints that could let the story go several different directions.

This is one of the best stories I have read. As least Ch. 01 is. I will reserve the next chapter after I read it.

This is a great tale. A man that stands his ground against a strange wife and the court system has a lot of balls. But what is actually on the now ex-wife's mind? I guess I'll find out...

Thanks for the offering.

Such a good and truthful story.

So pleased to see the true facts of Jehovah's Witnesses.

Not sure that he shouldn't have gotten an attorney himself, but I like it!

Oh yes! This man is my hero. I hope he burns down the meeting hall.

Abandon all hope, all ye who enter!

That's $428 a week. No wonder every woman is cheating on this guy and leaving him. Instead of him keeping on telling Elaine to get a job this guy needs to get more education or skills or something and make a real living.

Chapter one is looking good. Guess we'll see where it goes.

and who would believe that its over for good for real,,TK U MLJ LV NV

As a former Jehovah's Witness, this is laughable. I have to assume JPB has either done ZERO research into them, or is just mentally challenged.

Oh, it’s getting interesting now. I’ll definitely have to check out chapter two. As far as JW’s go, I would think JPB could have picked any religious group to cast as a cult, but since it’s now politically incorrect to criticize any religion other than the Christian religion, I guess he was limited in his choices. Anyway, good start.

What a stupid cult. Bunch of inbreds. Their family trees do not Fork

dont know if this will continue as JPB usually favors weak men w/ no balls or self respect. I still read him as he often presents interesting situations but mostly has pussies pretending to be men. so far so good, i can relate to this husband.

Hope the following chapters have him sticking to his guns and also sticking it up the cult.

holy shit he needs to get the fuck away from wherever he was living sounds like the whole town was cheating lol

if u marry someone that cant support themselves, they become a dependent like one of their children. dont marry someone that cant support themselves

You have to love a guy who sticks by his word.