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by drewwils

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago
I thought it was bad enough this was in 2nd person, then it got worse

Second person is hard for professional writers to maintain. This is a good example, since you seemed to change to third about half way through.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago
Great Story and Writing

Ignore the previous comment. This a beautiful story that is creatively done. I loved it. Thank you.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

Your works are masterpieces, I wish you wrote more

Gregory079Gregory079about 2 years ago

i really enjoy longer stories

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Lover of erotic writing, mostly around the forbidden and taboo. I like it when people paint simple pictures in words. Less is more. That lets the reader fill in the blanks. What is it that has led these people to this place? This is the purest and most beautiful love. This ...