All Comments on 'Rings of Fire Ch. 02'

by Tara Cox

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norafaresnorafaresalmost 5 years ago
Interesting

I'm looking forward to reading about the eco-village and what will happen there. Thank you for sharing. Will keep my eyes peeled for the next chapter.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 5 years ago
Great!!

Really good story, you are a very good writer. The plot is well built and the story is believable.

johntcookseyjohntcookseyalmost 5 years ago
Good to see you back

I lost track after reading the Sgt Mike series and the arrangement from Amazon. Oh, and I just found Raquel Graffen! I’ll review after I catch up on Rings. Thanks

PurplefizzPurplefizzabout 1 year ago

So far apart from landing the aircraft I haven’t advanced much more than the lead in chapter, having two virtually redundant chapters isn’t setting this up well, so from a critical readers pov it needs editing properly.

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