All Comments on 'Rings of Fire Ch. 11'

by Tara Cox

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muskyboy over 4 years ago

dragging it out too much

I really like this story but has really started to feel deliberately stretched out the last few chapters. The romance doesn't feel like it is building, just one long tease. You need to wind this up.

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