All Comments on 'Rising Ch. 08'

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dreamcatcher7dreamcatcher7over 17 years ago
brilliant

I love this tale, what a wonderful way with words you have

fantastic i cant wait to read more

AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
incredible

i agree with the other guy; your skill with words is unbelievable. i've been reading your bast series (updates soon?), and those stories only confirm it: sex or no, your stories are some of the best i've read till date

AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
Great stuff!! Can't wait for more!

The sexual tension is sweet, romantic and thrilling! Excellent story telling!!

PallasAthena123PallasAthena123about 11 years ago
Two months?

Of near-perpetual blizzards?? And they had fuel to keep a fire the whole time?!?!

Where did the icicles come from? That suggests it was warm enough for flowing water or melted snow at some point, enough to drip from the cave ceiling before it refroze.

Sorry, I interrupted myself partway through the first page to complain. I expect I'll be back :(

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