by sojourner2001
Have not seen a better Romance Story. The characters Believable, well, to a point, the problems well-handled, the 'joyousness' of the family equally so.
Easy on the eye, the story was, with no jarring errors, which really would trip up the reader.
Cheers & Congrats
Kilroy
Well-written, enjoyable enough--but not really romantic enough for my tastes. Should this not have gone in the 'Fetish' category?
Ah well... :-)
Wonderful and romantic and real, very real...despite the fetish. I loved it and will read your stories again...
...on Literotica SPELL???
If you’re on a bicycle, you pedal. Not peddle.
Past tense pedaled. Not peddled.
I swear, I’ve taught 12-year-olds who could spell better. And they didn’t think of themselves as writers...