All Comments on 'Risking it All in Vegas'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 17 years ago
loved it

this one touched me. thank you!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 17 years ago
?

Did you two actually get together? You seem like you both care for each other very much.

Reindeer58Reindeer58over 16 years ago
Outstanding & Wonderful

Great way to develop a story, the switching between voices was smooth and entirely believable. One error, she put on a bra after her bath, what happened to it? Does Cyn have a counterpart to this in her stories?

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