by jamboman
actually, that's a bit too harsh; if she wants to enjoy these things, fine,,,, but why make the husband so incredibly stupid?
Well written. Story line is possible though likely fictitious. Highly enjoyable read.
The story line is good though a bit incredulous. And once you did lose your way substituting yourself for Al Ross. Look out for any such goof ups in future. From the ending of the story, it would have been more appropriate had it been put in the Humor category.
Old joke. It's already been told here before. Dressing it up doesn't make it funnier than the last dozen times I've heard it.