All Comments on 'Ritual'

I found this story by happenstance and I couldn't have been more happier that I did. I really loved this story from beginning to end and hope that you do continue at least with Haystack taking the other acolytes. I also thought it was funny when you had the Male name their genitals lol, cant say I've seen that before in a story.

An extremely unusual but beautifully written piece. I enjoyed it immensely, I don’t usually like works with religion mixed in, but this is compelling and very, very good.