All Comments on 'Ritual of Three Vessels'

Interesting. Erotic. And curious if the character will continue? Power like that lasts a long while I'd wager. And a mind like that endures well the ages.

Good first short. I agree with the other comment and I already know that the witch Marissa comes back in a second story. =)

Kinda not surprised, witch's will do that, they value power above helping.

For some reason I love the feet sloshing in boots line, the youth sucked right out of him. Marissa escapes retribution, but I feel as though they'll hire someone to track her down, even another magic user. Yonotan or Yonaton deserves some of his youth again Just so he can hunt her like a dog and burn her.