All Comments on 'Rivals'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 5 years ago
I need to kniw who won

And of course who wore the strap-on for the fun part of the night!

Bi47Bi47about 5 years ago
WOW

Very hot 🔥😍😍😍🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 5 years ago
Editing needed

Sadie Sandie in first few lines.

jenorma2012jenorma2012about 5 years ago
not bad

let us know who wins the tennis match and who video tapes who

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Part-2 needed

Please upload the part-2 of this series. This story was awesome. Dying for part 2, thanks in advance.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago
Good

I liked this. Can you please make part 2. Thank you

AnonymousAnonymous8 months ago

This needs another part!!

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