All Comments on 'Rivals'

I did not think l would like this story, but I did. Do some more chapters please, bring Geri and Rose together, enslave them both. Become their Master and introduce them both to their new BDSM lifestyle, including discipline. Move Rose into your house, no Apartment for her. Make her your other sub slur together with mom. The story should make for some great chapters.

Scores 5/5

A bit long winded for me. I liked the premise and the action but in my mind it was 2 page story and not a 4 page story.

Enjoyed the story. Would love for you to continue to develop their relationship.

I’d like to see more of it. Also like to see Geri be top submissive to Rose.

I agree, would love to read more. Geri should be the queen bee. Mother should rule over sister in law.

Great story, love reading all your stories. Thank you and hope to read more!