All Comments on 'River'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 15 years ago
First time

A very good first story.Please continue writing.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 15 years ago
Offal

Smoking is a huge turnoff

marklionmarklionabout 15 years ago
Nice Story!!!

That was a nice story about River. It would be nice to see another chapter to see where they go from the first time. I also like the way you described him rescuing her from the problems that she had.

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