All Comments on 'Road Mom'

More please! 5/5 stars.

Part two?

What's not to love about a new J_S story! Super hot! Hopefully there'll be a followup chapter where she dumps Marvin for good. Five stars and a favorite point!

Good story just the right length and hot as all get out. Please continue to write.

Very Good. More Please

I like the road mom stories and yours is better than most. Everyone goes mom/son on these, try the daddy/daugther one too pls.

Liked the ending especially

We need epilogue

More please

Great story. Very HOT! 5 BIG STARS and a thank you.

What a story! Needs an option of BEST EVER!

Chapter 2 must be on it's way. Loved it. AAAAAA++++++

Love between mom and son is the most beautiful thing in the world, i hope Monica got pregnant to Avery, they need to be together forever!

5 stars!

Well done!! Exciting and well-paced. Didn't want it to end.

Awesome lets see part 2

I enjoyed this quite a lot, but it did sort of end pretty quickly. I would have liked to have seen a bit more fucking and get some sense of the fallout from what was happening. But it was a good, raunchy tale nonetheless.

This was an enjoyable read that deserves a follow up.

Loved the characters and story

5/5

Sorry but I subtracted a Star for the tongue up her asshole. Not a fan at all. It's her Clit,Clit,Clit that needs attention.

Do another part of this story please

The best damned story on all of Literotica! You brought these characters to life. It makes me remember my own sexy mother around that very time in my own life. She went with me to visit a college in Texas. We made love all night long the day before of my visit and we were lovers for the next 11 years until she died from lung cancer. Thank you for a lovely and super sexy story! FIVE STARS! Please continue with this story.

Very enjoyable take on the "backseat mom" meme. 5 stars!

I'm usually nor a fan of these type of stories but thus as written so sensitive and plausible that I a could actually understand why a mother would go down this road because of an insensitive and irritating husband ... needless to say a third husband. Thanks for sharing. Full Marks ... 5-Stars!

Please do at least one more chapter! love the anal take. it's so naughty and hot. Please explore more. I'd just ask that you keep it just mom and son.

Where's the next part of the story ? Where they are having all different kids of sex in the back of the van while her husband is driving.

That was so well written!

(10/30/2021) Nicely done. The only critique I have is not reading about the confrontation with her soon-to-be ex-hubby when they reach Avery's apartment. Would she have waited until after Marvin helped unload the SUV? How about a part 2 with some more fun and games on the second day? 5 stars from me.

I do NOT! likw big tits. B cup is my favorite, but I do like a great butt. That houses the pussy. The pussy is the ONLY place I want my dick and cum.

I could practically feel this woman's body.

Outstanding story. The way you described the characters, especially the mom, delving into her thoughts and feelings; it just brought her to life in such a real way. It is like you feel yourself there in the sons place. Truelly outstanding story. Please continue the story for the rest of the trip and what happens when they reach the apartment.

Awesome story and we'll written.

🔥 4.5 🌟 🌟 🌟 🌟

Really great story! The panty sniffing part was exceptionally hot. Keep up the good work

It was a good story, could’ve been a bit more descriptive in places but still very hott!! Please write part 2 where they explore anal sex??

Since everyone has his own opinion, I'll give mine. Didn't like the tonguing her ass. And, I think moms ought to have plenty of pussy hair. It was hot, though.

To be continued into 3 or 4 more chapters, covering the future they have together....... new place,, fresh start but as a loving (unofficial) married couple,

HOT 🔥🔥🔥.

Congratulations on a great story, some interesting descriptions, but a little sketchy on others, the ending was fairly obvious from quite early on, I was surprised that Marvin was not seriously assaulted before the family set out on the road trip.

Another fantastic story from you. 5 stars!!

Holding lighter in hand like at the end of a concert. More more, we want more!!! Lol. Maybe a part where she tells Marv to go on and digitally oscillate himself. Lol William - Fort Worth, Texas

This was an incredibly hot and loving story! My only complaint is that I have now read (and thoroughly enjoyed) every one of your stories and now have none left. I very rarely enjoy every story an author writes but you nailed every single one. So good! Please write more soon! Maybe some next chapters of these amazing characters!?

Amazing! Need more chapters about what happens next between them!

Wow! Can't get enough of these stories.

The only problem in your stories is that none of them have sequels, except one. We wonder how the characters will evolve in possible following chapters. For this one, i would like to read the naughty adventures of our incest couple in the van on the second day of the trip and how Monica will kick the ass of her stupid husband at the end. Also, i would like your sons/daddies to impregnate their mothers/daughters.

So, instead of writing new stories, i suggest you to try to write sequels of your stories, starting from the ones with higher grades. This is one of the nicest to start with.

I agree with Anonymous,expand on this story instead of starting a new one.That,without a doubt will leave us wanting more as these have..lol. 5 Stars

Loved this story but you stopped to soon you need to continue with this with them living together and having children 5 stars !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Hottest stories on Lterotica about my favorite genre.

L would part 2 of mom an son on East on coast ?

Wow. The progression, As well as painting soon to be ex-husband number 3 as a massive mistake of settling, you hit all the right notes on this symphony of sin and love. 5*

It's more common than people think the bond between mother and son is strong. Unfortunately it's not talked about in the open. Family closeness is very very common.

How do you, author, figure this to be a complete story? Her husband is already irritated at how well mother and son are getting on, they have one glorious suck and fuck session and done?! It's not that i want to be treated to more and more of their raunchy sweaty sex and love- i want to know how she escapes her marriage! What's the look on his face when she stays behind? Does she tell him some cockamamy story or does she lay it out for her inadequate (in the face her son's prowess) unlovable husband? Just how far does his jaw drop? Kinda chickenshit not to delve into the coming shit storm. I loved what i you wrote- it's fun and sexy. But what happens next ought to have been included. Am i repeating myself? Probably. I've read a bunch of your stories and really like how you write. Thanks for doing so!

True, this is common trope, but you did an excellent job bringing it to life. Mother and son motivation, other than she is hot and he wants her, is usually lacking. You handled it well. Since this was her third marriage it Is not surprising she would move on. For those who want something different, let them write their own story.

That was pretty hot.