by MicheleNylons
Well written story Michele N. You must be relieved that nothing like this would ever happen to you…..
You can do much better than this MicheleNylons , more focused and sophisticated , less words , in 2 pages not 4 .
I like that you know and use the proper anatomy terms for the genitals and it wasn't cringey. I also learned a few new vocab words like 'incongruous' and your Shakespeare reference "think your wife doth protest too much." Could've been a little shorter tho but still great story
Just wanted to say you're an excellent writer and I look forward to reading more of your stories.
Very well written, I enjoyed it a lot, especially Michele's sexual tension as she eggs on the men to abuse her. Great ending too. I didn't think it was too long, personally I enjoy a realistic build up of characters and circumstance that leads into the act.